Need an opinion...

[Shmear]

Ok... i've made a couple of sketches. The teacher seems to like them a lot. There's one in particular that i think is an awesome idea.
A woman, with a short dress and classy.
Do you guy's think i should add something or take something away or just modify something?

This one is just a closer look at the face- area.

 

[smokingIsh]

I think it is pretty cool the way it is!

 

[Moro]

I like the new additions!

 

[Greg]

Great sketch!

It appears that her left knee is bent though, which seems a little awkward.

 

[dpricenator]

Give her big ole J-lo butt...:grin:

 

[amgracing]

looks good to me

 

[hdroadglide]

a little less smoke (width), but a little darker so it's a little more prominent.

 

[Shmear]

a little less smoke (width), but a little darker so it's a little more prominent.

I was sort of thinking the same thing. It's one of those times when you know whats wrong with the drawing but you can't see it.

Thanks!

 

[hdroadglide]

you're welcome.
can't wait to see the finished product. but one question....
how did you get alfonso to stand so still while he was modeling?????

 

[vperlman]

Is she married? :starrylov

 

[Shmear]

you're welcome.
can't wait to see the finished product. but one question....
how did you get alfonso stand so still while he was modeling?????

Hahahahahahahahahaha.
Sorry Alfonso, it was funny.

 

[Moro]

you're welcome.
can't wait to see the finished product. but one question....
how did you get alfonso to stand so still while he was modeling?????

:headroll: :grinFU: Touché

 

[BradMc]

MMMMMM makes me excited....Very good work Shmear

 

[Swampfox21]

wow shmear that looks awesome!

 

[Donk]

very good work shmear, Great sketch

 

[terrantheman]

That's a very good sketch I like the smoke, I feel like I should be looking for something in it? It's great with wonderful detail and the joke was funny:yes:

 

[BGC]

Quite the artist Shmear looks great

 

[Hardcore]

Leave it the way it is.

 

[RigilKent]

looks great ill get you a few soon. probably over the weekend. Im and Industrial Design student so i was going to go more towards product type art. maybe a series of cigars in and ashtray or something.

 

[Shmear]

looks great ill get you a few soon. probably over the weekend. Im and Industrial Design student so i was going to go more towards product type art. maybe a series of cigars in and ashtray or something.

NICE! :thumbsup: