Getting a little Shakespeare-ish tone in there.Fixed it for you.
The important distinction between who and that is one of my pet peeves. Who is alive; that is not.
"Who is alive; that is not"... but rather to be or not to be THAT is the question.
Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,
Or to take arms against a sea of troubles
And by opposing end them. To die—to sleep,
No more;